Here, everyone can discuss what they think about the story. Please post it here, the DISCUSSION page, and not on the actually story pages...please and thank you.
Let Loki and I know what you think, some helpful hints on what we can do to improve or what you want us to do to the pair....we are open to suggestions. Loki and I do know pretty much what we are going to do for many of the future portions of the story, but reader input could be very helpful.
No spoilers yet. Although Loki or myself may post something on this page. So do come back and see if we 'leak' something. *evilchuckle*